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из минусов: черные поля, голосовые вставки и местами дёрганный монтаж не в тему.
из плюсов: трек, хорошее м/в без изысков, ну и местами атмосфера удалась. Пожалуй 4 для оценочной.
З.Ы. Что за трек в титрах?
Not too bad, though the zooms & shakes were too repetitive you should have made them smother and zoomed out slowly or something so it won't feel like too many zooms are used only for close up purposes. Also your scene selection were not really on point, meaning they didn't show much emotion. Lastly with the voice-overs if you wanted more emotion into it and not have it look like a trailer then you should have used proper scene selection where it helps better. If you wanted a trailer look then try using more text for titles or something and fix up the story because it didn't really stand out well.
From me -3
Good luck on your next!
If you don't know what I said then I might get a friend of mine to translate (If I'm able to)