Hello, my Russian (and non-Russian) friends!
Today I present to you my very first AMV called Senmetsu which means annihilation (уничтожение) in Japanese. My goal with this amv is to get constructive criticism so I can do it better next time. Also I do realize that there is another AMV on here with the same song but i still used the song anyway since I really like it.
Please comment on my mistakes I would really appreciate it. Enjoy, Peyzman
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Anime: Oda Nobuna no Yabou, Guilty Crown, Kurokami, Inu x Boku SS, Legend of the Legendary Heroes, Hunter x Hunter, Shingeki no Kyoujin, Gargantia, Shakugan no Shana, Bleach, Evangelion(movies),
Music: Hurt-Overdose
2 Author - too short, imho, + sync is too... episodic.
Morpheus - example of good amv with this track.
4-
Ну как-бы не соглашусь. Именно тут задумка автора достаточно ясна, может ее сложно сформулировать словами, но логика в последовательности сцен - только слепой не уловит.
Как и ясно, что не хватает еще немного опыта по подбору-сведению исходников. Как уже заметили, хватило бы двух-трех более соответствующих настроению в треке.
Из минусов - огрызочность, как будто автору не хватило терпения на полноценный сюжет-работу.
After 0:44 the video begins to lose its momentum and I agree that the addition of the giants fighting was a little strange.
Your editing was done well to match the movements of the video, but you would have done well to make the amv longer and developed your scenes together more so.
I look forward to your next try~
I used google translate to see what you are saying and I agree with you all.
hopefully i can work on these points for the next time and get better results.
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Want to explain why?
This is your opinion, just because you don't like it doesn't mean it's bad for amv's.
из явных претензий - 1:17 ассоциируется со рвотой, это лишнее
Очень даже.
с провисаниями, скажем так.
Концовка с гигантами, как по мне, не вписывается. В целом, для оценочной 4+
Просто мв легло.
Ну и 15 фпс совсем не ок. Не надо так. 23-29 самое оно.