Последние комментарии TritioAFB

VovanKoperativ, dude, took you so much to notice the video

Guess who's back

Now this is story. Personally I'll like to mention that the video has sucess as a drama, even kind of horror. Very good

pic4arts, did you ever hear about 'alter' stories?

Also, what's with the youtube link?

ThalesEditions, That guy is a she

Good to see you finally did it my friend

enhorabuena

I dont remember when was the last time I saw all the studio together. Cool

guess who's back baby

ThalesEditions написал(а):
What the Hell?

It's ok when you dont understand a video, everybody is like that

Hmm I see. It was like when I first met Gorz: I thought he was chinese until he clarified. Dont you worry about the trolling, it's just that we want to joke suddenly, then it's ok

You seem to have the attitude since you're asking nicely about what was wrong and what could be improved. All right then, have one review:

At 0:04, I liked what you tried to do, but for some reasons it felt like you rushed this scene compared with the previous one. The hard cut before wasnt effective. Probably a crossfade could have helped there.

At 0:08, I can notice the mask disappearing first, then the BG is still there and next you use a NewBlue transition. Rather than that, a black fade keeping the two elements together could have helped there.

In 0:11-0;12 didnt do a good synch, although seems legit the scene. For example, you can hear the main beat and the scene with the titan appearing behind Eren comes first, missing that beat.

Next at 0:14 you can listen clearly the change in the song, then you still have the scene going. If I were you I would have done the change of scenes at that moment and not until 0:15

You can listen at 0:23 the change again, but this time you didnt miss the beat

The scene at 0:37 seemed slow, but nothing much to say. At least it made sense considering the previous scene.

Now at 0:41 instead of the NewBlue fx you could have tried the following thing: take the scene with Titanomachy and make that scene move, like giving the impression the previous scene is moving forward that scene, and not that the title scene is the one moving to the previous one being static this last one.

When the clip starts at 0:44 you have a situation: There are several beats which is just impossible to hit one per one with only one scene. Then what you can do is to take several scenes and try to hit some of them like you did here

Something important happens at 0:55 - due the scene combo you chose, I can feel the mood of the clip, which is key for every single viewer: The atmosphere itself. It gives this feeling of 'trailerish'

In 1:01 you start to have this change of two beats every 3 seconds. You didnt hit any so it gives this feeling of 'No synch in that section'

at 1:12 there you go, you hit one combo of beats with Levi

Too weird nobody mentioned the minute 1:17, I liked that change considering the original scene

Now at 1:23 you have again that problem: many beats, not much synch. I will mention that in this section you even gave this feeling of Horror video, too bad it didnt have enough intensity so that mood was missed

Liked the section at 1:31 when you start showing that scene combo with Eren and their mates being eaten by the titans

1:46, good

1:48 I would have replaced that section, the 1:46 had impact you could have continued with that impact, but then the next scenes are slow compared to the music, they have synch though

1:55 kind of rush but okay, the impact is there

Since the music stops at 2:01, leaving this scene without audio would have been boring.

2:11 - the changes between scenes are too slow

2:15 - the synch returns, and part of the impact

2:31 - that hard cut didnt help much. Since the two scenes are so different you could have tried a transition there

2:47 - excellent combination there

As a resume of the serie, wasnt bad. Just not something new due the amount of videos out there. You have potential so try to edit more

OFF TOPIC: Where are you from then? I thought you were ukranian

I remember doing a similar combination. Except that I used Tragedy from Celldweller, don't remember this song right now. I will have to check this one

People say you dont have to use mainstream. They are forgetting something very important though: If the case is, making an original video featuring that source as your main, do it .... unless the video is not far different from the average clip.

As long as your material is anime-oriented, is ok. If you feel you want to make it, go for it, even if we dislike it. At the end, this is just a hobby

Y luego dicen que porque nadie quiere hablar en ruso