Последние комментарии Shinzui

Very nice, but doesn't seem like a psyche

It's quite interesting. At some places I found the timing to be a bit odd and other places it was a bit slow when wasn't needed. This also felt as if something was missing, but nonetheless -4.

Nice

I liked it. Very beautiful indeed with some great scene selections and timing

This is very nice! It brought some joy, but it felt like it was missing something.

That was pretty nice, I didn't like the beginning though

Quite interesting

Very interesting, but could have been a bit better like with the optical flares and etc..

Again, very nice you guys!

Sorry, but I didn't like it that much. I found a lot of mistakes.

0:31 the slide down could have been better kind of looked awkward seeing the same clip sliding instead of having it sliding with another into the clip you were getting to. Then at 0:36 the hexagon thing kind of killed the mood as you put it in kind of randomly, you did the same thing I think again at another place.

The burn effect you didn't need it, all you need was proper scene selection and it would have looked clean. At 0:39 it actuall killed the flow the effect you used and it looked pretty bad.

At 0:46 the blinds effect certainly didn't help with the flow and even the anime & scene selection. 0:52 you shouldn't have done that it ruined it a bit when the scene gets pressed in like that. 0:55 you killed the flow again when you used improper scene selection & anime.

The shatter effect at 0:58 looked kind of improper and out of place, again you didn't need it. All you needed was proper anime mix & scene selection.

I didn't like the things at 1:02, 1:07, and 1:19 everything else was okay. You need to improve on your mix of anime, proper transitions, effects, flow, and keeping the atmosphere.

You should lighten up on the effects because you used too many and most of the times you didn't need it and became a bit too colorful, which also ruined your flow a bit.

Overall, it was okay had some major mistakes. For me, I say -3.

GL on your next!

It's pretty interesting, but a lot of mistakes

Hmm okay... Though the beginning was quite long and hard to understand your concept

I found it quite boring, could have attacked it much better.

Not bad. It started a bit "eh", but began to pick up

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Read pic4arts's original comment.

That's not mocking that's critisism