Last comments Ryoushi5

NewOvermind, Thank you very much for your pertinent evaluation. I will try to correct my shortcomings and work harder in my future work.
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Vhenrik wrote:
I'd instantly give this a 5 if it wasn't for those texts, and if it'd be shorter. That's it. It is done really well I think, nice flow, not much eyxehurting outstanding effects, you used them well for the sync and flow too. I'm honestly sorry, but those texts are really a nono for me. Way too eyecandy where (imo) you really don't need them. The video could've been enjoyable and nice looking without them but now I feel those parts overwhelmed. And here comes the length of the vide as well. 3:46 for such an action... Well, maybe that's just me.
But it's still a great vid, and I wish you good luck on the contest!

Thank you very much for watching all my work and giving me relevant comments. You pointed out the mistakes in the work, I think this is very worthy of my reservation, and to improve in future work.
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Shareman wrote:
I liked it, the association works well and your transitions is good. Maybe some camera movements was a bit rough but overall your video is good, good job and good luck for the contest

Thank you very much for loving my job, although he looks incomplete and rough. Indeed, due to various reasons in the production process, I cannot continue to modify the subtle parts of the work, but this should not be an excuse for the poor quality of my work. thank you for your good wishes.
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Encruzio, Thank you very much for loving my job and expressing your views. Indeed, as you said, my use of light effects is very rough, and I will make more corrections to the use of light effects in the future.
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Fox114 wrote:
на одной половине чизкейка это - очень крутой и вкусный чизкейк, который приготовлен по все правилам кулинарии. На второй половине чизкейка это - намешан перец и сахар с солью. И тут такое дело что - вроде и круто, но смотря все дальше и дальше , понимаешь, что будь кадры просто поменяные местами - было бы куда круче и зрелейшней . Но опять же, это все тот же чизкейк с классной половиной ;3

Beautiful metaphor, due to language problems, I actually have no way to fully understand what you mean, I hope you can give an intuitive opinion, thank you very much!

Oooo, I like it so much, energetic girl, very funny