Последние комментарии Mystyk

This video has way too many face scenes, the lip synch was kinda bad, the beat synch was REALLY bad, the whole video lacked flow, the scenes barely had any motion in them. The effects were nice and fitting, but this video lacks basics such as beat synch and flow, so instead of concentrating on effects, try to put more effort in the editing itself.

My name is listed three times, twice as Mystyk and once as Heni xD

I'm glad the MEP is finally done, but I don't really like the outcome, there were some nice parts that I liked though.

2:00 - 2:48 - these parts were pretty nice, I really liked the gundam part

2:48 - 3:28 - I felt sorry that owari was used and not another sci-fi anime, it felts like owari no seraph doesn't fit with the rest of the animes that were used with that song, and it lacked beat synch

4:32 - 4:40 - could have had better scene selection, even if it doesn't fit the lyrics, you could have used something other than people keeping the fire alive in a train xDD

4:50 - "running the race with blood on my face" - high school boys playing volleyball, unfitting scene choice

5:16 - 5:36 - too slow

Too lazy to write for every part but some parts were nice, some were average or bad.

editing is nice but if you want to improve then stop using all those pretty opening scenes that we have seen 100 times already, this video is way too overrated

nice mistake...
http://puu.sh/syAyC/3ade4e3612.jpg

There shouldn't be so many crossfades in an action AMV, even though I liked that the editor matched the scenes to the lyrics but the editing is very basic, beginner-like editing, it could be a lot better.

I actually like this (probably because I like the song), but evangelion is really overused, the scenes are basically just action scenes without meaning, although I could see that you matched the scenes to the lyrics a lot of times and I liked that!

Also, from about 2:48 the video gets really seizure, it hurts the eyes. Some parts of the video doesn't have any flow, for example 0:40 - 0:41 and 1:35, you could have added some movements to those scenes. Also 0:43, why is there so much synching, the song doesn't really ask for it? 2:08 what is that blank scene doing there?

Maybe there is no point in telling now, but the things I mentioned could be easily avoided though.

It's really nice that you had a concept, but an amv about walking for 3 whole minutes is kind of boring. It looks like you didn't have enough scenes so you didn't synch as much as you should have. I mean, you don't have to synch every single time, but you could have made it a little bit faster during the chorus, for example the scene at 1:06 is too long, and also, the places where you actually synched are kind of random in my opinion.

The fx around 1:20 looked quite out of place.

The masks could have been improved, since the whole AMV has masks, and that's like the main part of it, you could have paid more attention to them. For example this:
https://goo.gl/hJyymG
Look at the legs (and the whole mask). They are too bright, it's not blending with the background.

Also the scenes at around 1:54-1:55 didn't fit the mood, they were too "funny".

Maybe having more animes would have done a little good, so more characters looking for answers, even if you use more animes with similar scenes, it will still make sense (if you do it the right way). But like this, it lacks flow in my opinion.

Some scenes could have had some panning and the transitions could have been smoother (1:49).

Overall nice concept, but I think the outcome could have been improved.

thecacovenom написал(а):
Yo, this is a good MEP, it has nice transition between each part, animes are mix very well. However sometime you guys lose the sync, some of the zoom are a bit too rough as well as some transitions that you seems to force them too much like this 1:25, sometimes is better not to do it. This MEP has a good flow, I liked it.

Thank you so much for your opinion! Maybe next time I should beta test the parts in a harsher way haha

Also thanks for everyone else who gave a useful opinion!

I agree that the MEP could have been improved or that it is not perfect, obviously, but I'm glad that everyone managed to follow the theme, even if there was no real story behind, and I also think that since the tracks used a very little amount of fx the parts fit each other. I think that using the natural colors of the animes are the best for this song, of course everyone has a different imagination for this, but I think that this way the MEP was more united.

To the haters: Just to clear misunderstandings. I never expected everyone to like this, I have no idea how you came to that conclusion when all I asked for was a useful opinion. I'm sure there are people who like it and there are people who don't, which is totally fine, but the way you express your opinion is wrong, I feel sorry for newbies who'll stop making AMVs because you guys told them their videos were bad and you didn't give anything useful for them to improve on. If anyone wants to talk about this in private, we can, but I think there is no point in continuing this.

Insanty написал(а):
Божественно. Это всё равно что убить проститутку в Fallout 4 ради красных туфель и платья...

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This is NOT constructive criticism. If you dislike something, tell properly why you dislike it.

Thanks to everyone else for their opinions.

although I really like the scene choices, they fit well, and I like the lip synch too, but the editing is kind of...lacking...some of the black fades looked awkward and also these kind of mistakes: http://puu.sh/kFmi5/66e9f8cbfc.jpg
oh and the tv logo X_X I hope you'll get rid of that in the future
but really good job on the scene choices and lip synch, I liked those

amazing work and interesting concept, unfortunately I couldn't enjoy this that much though, the song was also kind of boring and video is very long (and to be honest I'm not really a fan of FMA amvs because the souce is overused but at least you tried to make it interesting) but seriously that long credits...well anyway congrats, you did a good job!

I really love this video, I love the use of effects and the synch, I also like the song (which probably makes me like the video more haha), it is really nice that you guys cooperated so nicely using the same anime to make a collab, good job! :3

I think you should decide on only one category, in this case, mixing action and fun wasn't a good idea because it looked too random (for example the scenes from 0:52), I liked how you tried to find scenes that fits to the lyrics though :P I think there could have been more effects to emphasize the strange sounds in the music, so as it was mentioned before, I also think you should improve your sync and effects and the first thing that I mentioned about the categories

Nice use of effects and transitions but there isn't enough beat synch and the scenes are random (which would have been fine if they fit to the lyrics at least), also, the part from 0:44-0:54 is way too slow and the zooms don't really fit (in my opinion), the zooms don't make up for the missing beat synch :( (and next time you should remove the text from the manga pages) 3

such a well-done video, I really like that you also shown their friendship and not only love as in other video, so good job!

ActiveNoise написал(а):
Heni good)

daww thank you haha xD