Karton

Zest написал(а):
i`m not a some HMV editor :P

that's me

IdiAlex, Thanks, that`s really helpful now. i`m sorry it`s sometimes really weird to work with google translate haha

The Robovoice, aswell as the Mememe parody are meant as a joke, if it didn`t work i`ll keep that in mind for the next time.

I picked the colors out of the original video you can youtube it "eis.de es rappelt im karton". i kept the whole color / layout style since i liked the idea of the original advertising spot (it`s an award winning commercial in germany). i think the decision to work with this colorset is a good choice since the plan was to make "sex" something more funny and enjoyable and not something dark and evil. that`s why i decided to go with it aswell. it`s meant to be refreshing instead of: sex is meant to carry the color of black and red....

i give you a cheers to the lipsynch part haha i think i could have done that better. i tend to not give it as much of attention as i should

please don`t think i`d cheat my video up. that`s something i wouldn`t do, in my opinion the work of an artist should always be able to speak for itself, if it doesn`t get upvoted, it wasn`t enjoyable to the people, if it`s not enjoyable for the people it`s fine, too. :)

i`ve been doing amvs for 13 years now with that mindset, i`m not changing it.

i`ll always welcome your feedback! maybe you`ll like my next video. i`d be happy to deliver something you like!

And sorry for being lewd haha but don`t worry i`m not a some HMV editor :P

Zest написал(а):
could you please give me some feedback?

Sure! I haven't mentioned any bad points but (i think) cheating the evaluation.
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Meso said:

MesoGear написал(а):
ну, сгодится что бы в каком-нибудь японском секс шопе куртить

в остальном, если субъективно, осадочек мерзкий остается после просмотра, как-то слишком жирно и в целом прямолинейно... пересматривать вообще не тянет, в прочем, я в целом не любитель такого.

It's ok to present it somwhere in japanese sex-shop.
Otherwise, there is some lousy aftertaste, too forthrightly. No wish to rewatch it, but i don't like smth like this.
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Donna what Meso didn't like, so I'll tell you my IMHO, ok?

First, awful robo-voice at the very beginning. You made Windows Narrator read this? Sad((
Then, colors. Dim, as for me.
Mememe parody on 0:41? https://pp.vk.me/c626117/v626117871/29d5d/C46gf7uUME4.jpg
and here: https://pp.vk.me/c626117/v626117871/29d67/jwEvQ53ck_g.jpg
Bad lip sync sometimes.
And the theme of your clip. Don't think respectable editor can allow themselves make such a lewd thing.

Zest написал(а):
if google translate works right

Very rarely

hey alex and meso thanks for the comments! could you please give me some feedback? Especially for the layout bad points you mentioned (if google translate works right).

MesoGear, бессовестных надо бить несчадно!!!!

Richtiger Garçon xD

IdiAlex написал(а):
Клип явно не на 4.24

когда на главку перенесут, там оценка скорее всего уже ниже четверки будет

Клип явно не на 4.24 (по состоянию на 23:30 04.09.2016 по мск). Или мне кажется, что тут неслабая накрутка голосовалки и оценки?

Орнул,доставило.

ну, сгодится что бы в каком-нибудь японском секс шопе куртить

в остальном, если субъективно, осадочек мерзкий остается после просмотра, как-то слишком жирно и в целом прямолинейно... пересматривать вообще не тянет, в прочем, я в целом не любитель такого.

В плане компоновки можно было лучше, но таки доставило как чай с шоколадкой. ( ￣ω￣)b

For anyone who wants subtitles, i subbed it on youtube for you guys Поехали! =D