Последние комментарии RealShinteki

by far most epic mmv i've seen, 5

really like this one, 5

nice work

love it, my fav so far 5

Thanks everyone!

nezumichan написал(а):
I want to like this because I can see that you put a lot of effort and thought into it. And you have all my respect for starting things so far in advance of the contest, I don't have that kind of discipline.

However, there are too many things that don't work for me. The numerous fades to black in the first part of the video interrupt the flow and, at some point, begin to make my eyes hurt, along with those white gradients in the top left corner (would have preferred them to be dimmer) that you used on too many scenes.

At first I thought the video would be about the female figures in Kiritsugu's life and that felt like an awesome idea. Then I saw all those Servants fighting and I didn't understand why they were present at all. I can see why Saber's there (being Kiritsugu's Servant) and if she's fighting Lancer, ok, that's fine. But Archer and Berserker don't fit at all, in my oppinion. I would have liked to see Irisviel (and Illyasviel, as well, for that matter) a bit more before he strangles her, there was no connection created between them before it got to that point (like you did with Shirley).

The song has such a beautiful structure and, although I kind of understand why you'd want to cut it here and there (shortage of scenes, I presume), the cut you made at around 2:58 is too much for me, it hits me like a hammer in the head. Two other things I want to mention are the sync that is rarely on point and the rain added to a star-filled, completely clear night sky.

By now you probably hate me, but don't get me wrong. There are many moments filled with emotion and good atmosphere, I can see that. There are also parts where you did a great job with the scene selection. It's just that the things I mentioned before hinder my overall enjoyment of the video and I can't be as hyped as everybody here, although I tried my hardest and rewatched it like 10 times just for this purpose.

Nevertheless, I encourage you to keep working hard and become better and better with each project you do. I never give this kind of feedback because I know it's not my place to do it, but I felt a strong connection to this video (because I love Kiritsugu so much) and really wanted to speak my mind about it.

I agree with some stuff. Thanks for taking the time to review, i appreciate it!

yay its out, epic dave