okhostok:

You deliberately avoided hospital scenes. ) The video is well made, but at the same time, it was boring for me. Because just I know what will be in the next scenes. I think video makers should sometimes use some scenes that help the audience to concentrate. (You tried to use this at 1:48, but that was not enough big change).

Well, I provide one example, if I was not clear. Let's imagine that you are going to start a presentation with speech. Your task is to have an audience in the state of flow ( https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flow_(psychology) ). One way to make a flow, you should use a change. Changes are two types: micro-changes and macro-changes. You used micro-change: silence before the critical scene at 1:48. Macro-change could be something like a small part that reverses everything before. And you have a bit longer duration, so you should have used more frequent breaks. I think that's all.

BTW, I admire your videos. Keep doing this...

canalla:

Только эффект на 01:02 выбивается из общей атмосферы.

Lion0608:

Маппл, где клип на БК?
И почему постер в какой-то прям траурной рамке(