I just wish there were only Shiki in this work. Because I can only let her be either with Mikiya or obviously with me .
Shiki's scenes are rather good. 1:52-2:25 is the most delicious part for me here. I particularly liked the way backgrounds were shifting.

And once again comes Itachi with a pan...
Well, quite hilarious to watch .

It's absurd to extent which makes me laugh. Well... Brilliant idea you've got.

It's a been a pleasure to my eyes. Though I think some effects were a bit unnecessary.
Still, it makes some good mv combination.

Ha, what a cool song.
Fans will appreciate, I'm sure.

Фанату Гинтамы, то есть мне, вполне понравилось.

Только вот зачем вот это: http://i.imgur.com/NfkVpDI.png
Необузданное желание запихнуть свою авку в меч Гинтоки вместо старика Зангецу?

Enjoyed this one quite a bit. It gave me few shivers at some scenes. I'm feeling now like I want to rewatch s1.
Just maybe, I would agree with ones below talking about duration.

Клип понравился.
Идея с артбуком понравилась.
Всё бы хорошо, только заполнен он как-то неаккуратно и будто на скорую руку. Не хочу особо нудить, но текст не помешало бы немного отредачить. Либо выкинуть оттуда воду, либо расширить, объясняя всё более внятно. Его, говоря проще, нужно по-человечески адаптировать. Плюс, присутствует много ошибок, преимущественно в русской версии.

Что ж, удачи тебе в будущих проектах.

Мои глаза приятно насытились. .

Аж пить захотелось. Нравится.
При своей необычности клип смотрится легко и, как бы сказать, "прохладно". Даёт почувствовать лёгкий летний ветерок и стакан воды со льдом в руке.

There's nothing remarkable, yet it's quite pleasant one to watch. Just maybe you went too far with sync.

P.S. hah... http://i.imgur.com/QozBSv5.png

Э-э... это странно как-то.

I were just thinking that it's an ordinary romance amv... when the boy somewhat turned out to be somewhat slut. Really, man .

Speaking on behalf of the humble viewer, which is to view and enjoy the clip here in first place, I wanna say this is very stunning and "tasty" one to watch.
I liked the idea in general and how you had implemented narrator into this. It created a feeling like I'm watching a short film rather than amv. Thanks for your work.

А цветочек красивый.

Ни плохого не скажешь, ни хорошего. Для фанов, скорее.
Согласен касаемо нижележащих претензий к отыгрышу.

For Spartak and home kill you all.

История очень сложно прослеживается, если вообще прослеживается.
В целом как-то скучно.

Великолепно, пробирает даже.

Воу, оказывается-таки, по этим убогим аниме-адаптациям можно сделать что-то эдакое.
Круто. Понравилось.

Рандом, идею сложно проследить.
Но рандом, который смотрится и сочетается с музыкой хорошо.

Нарезать 2-3 серии и впихнуть это в 60-фпс клип с такой-то песней -
как-то несерьёзно, кхем.
Хотя мне понравилось, когда они начали орать на море. Это было здорово .

b3ko1722:

Oh, I see. My bad. I like to play around with the sound sometimes, and I never really dedicated much time to make any of my amvs. I made this one in two days, since I was in a tight schedules, so I wasn't very careful overall, I admit ^^' TY for the advice once again, I'll make sure I dedicate enough time to my next AMV! :)

Well, it wasn't for nothing. But yeah, it can be improved in many ways.
Good luck then, be sure to be attentive for details next time. I'll be waiting your next work.

Слишком медленно.

It's very beautiful. Not flawless but still I've enjoyed it hella lot.
I've been thinking about it and still can't figure it out. Why is there a snail indeed? Should I read Virginia Woolf's work to understand that right?

Я конечно ни черта не понял, но это было неплохо, да.

It's kinda vague in the way of delaying the idea you've written in description. Or it seemed so to me. The end is abrupt and questionable.
Technically, it's cool, I guess.

It's quite pleasant to watch. There is no lots of good action amvs with Fate. As a fact, I can only recall few ones. This one goes to a category with "good" label.

b3ko1722:

Ty very much for the feedback! I didn't know that about the mouths, I think the one where she says "somedays I feel like shit" was pretty "cute"xD

You're welcome
Actually, that one wasn't bad. And that's why I've written you should avoid it when it's unnecessary. When you're trying to achieve some kind of effect on purpose it's okay. In this case, it's called "lip sync". There are a lot of clips which use lip sync. It's complicated effect to achieve in fact. Among lately examples I can recall Red Queen

Technically it's not great. Sure thing, it has flaws. For example, try to avoid scenes when characters open their mouths when it's unnecessary. It's considered to be a bad tone in amv-community.
However, I liked your work.

In terms of "Dennshou" amv, how you called it, it's all right.
Ending was abrupt.