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really enjoyable

Oh Javy

This was pretty nice and enjoyable

pretty nice, though transitions are a bit messy

Quite enjoyable the only thing is more could have been added

You should try to stay away from the tv watermarks.

Not too bad, though the zooms & shakes were too repetitive you should have made them smother and zoomed out slowly or something so it won't feel like too many zooms are used only for close up purposes. Also your scene selection were not really on point, meaning they didn't show much emotion. Lastly with the voice-overs if you wanted more emotion into it and not have it look like a trailer then you should have used proper scene selection where it helps better. If you wanted a trailer look then try using more text for titles or something and fix up the story because it didn't really stand out well.

From me -3

Good luck on your next!

If you don't know what I said then I might get a friend of mine to translate (If I'm able to)

A fun watch!

pretty nice, though you could have added some crossfades because some of your hardcuts like in the beginning can make someone dizzy just by looking at the scenes and when it dramatically changes to another one. Then some of your transitions looked odd like at 0:58 where it zoomes out, that didn't fit in very well maybe an other scene might have worked better because the scene changed pretty fast and the movement was too quick when that happened it's like it changes atmosphere within transitions instead of keeping the same. You should also watch the lip flaps (unless it was to help the emotion show, in which I didn't really feel any).

When changing scenes make sure you have movement for every scene because when it stops and continue back again it starts to rupture. I couldn't really understand what you tried to do even after reading the description, but in the end it was pretty nice.

From me, 3.

no

I did not like

Watch the watermarks

It's okay nothing really special. In the beginning the timing was a bit off in some cases and once it got the dubstep part I found the pacing slower than the song and was missing some sync.

Well it's okay, but I found it boring. From me -3

Ah go Farm!

WTF?? Did you copy & paste in the first part of the description from mine? Party Zombiez

Well to me the song didn't really fit in well and a lot more should have been added.

I'll put this here
Beat Drop

Quite interesting +3