Ruthless Devotion

immikun написал(а):
Большая часть клипа - тоска смертная. Я не проникся.

Аналогичное впечатление от просмотра. Клип одна сплошная тягомотина.

Отличный. Я мало видел АМВ на Ф/З, поэтому это пока лучший для меня) 5

Блин, вот первая часть, - хороший клип с приятным м/в, а потом пошли стреляние из базук по самолётам и ещё какая-то "невтёмная мистическая хрень" (хотя м/в всё равно приятным осталось).
Стремление к пафосу и визуальной показухе сильно портит отменную в принципе работу.
4

оригинальная робота на Fate/Zero, 5 и в копилку

you made a really beautifull amv! 5 for me

This was really nice, I honestly thought you would place higher. Maybe people are just done with Fate Zero, or I don't know. Good job anyways :)

Я один проникся?
Я Фейт только читал)

По мне так на пять)

Большая часть клипа - тоска смертная. Я не проникся. 3

really love this one !! 5

Шикарная работа.Впечатлился

Очень хорошая работа.

Mousee написал(а):
Вот это сильная работа. Понравилась очень.

угу сильно

Вот это сильная работа. Понравилась очень.

Сама идея такого амв не по душе , вывернули душу гг на изнанку , с подачей лучших моментов его жизни
И в добавок:
Больше половины клипа не было откровенной магии и блин нате вам, зачем , можно наверно было уже обойтись и без этого.

Great job ivan5 from me, but I think its more accurately between 4-5. Nezumi brings up a lot of good points. I definetly think you leveled up tho gjgjgj

Как по мне явный лидер конкурса. Спасибо автору. 5.

Minori_xd написал(а):
а как свой клип добавить?

Почитайте эту тему на фооруме:
http://amvnews.ru/forum/viewtopic.php?t=351&start=0

Про новую форму добавления клипов эта тема:
http://amvnews.ru/forum/viewtopic.php?t=4118

Если у вас возникнут какие либо вопросы, то, чтобы не мусорить под клипами оффтопом, вы можете задать их в этой теме:
http://amvnews.ru/forum/viewtopic.php?t=117&start=0

Или в произвольной форме описать трудности (если вы с ними столкнётесь) в этой теме:
http://amvnews.ru/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1131&start=0

А ещё, капитан очевидность подсказывает, что в правом верхнем углу главной страницы сайта, третьей строчкой под вашим никнеймом, есть активная гиперссылка на которой написано "Добавить клип"

а как свой клип добавить?

Thanks everyone!

nezumichan написал(а):
I want to like this because I can see that you put a lot of effort and thought into it. And you have all my respect for starting things so far in advance of the contest, I don't have that kind of discipline.

However, there are too many things that don't work for me. The numerous fades to black in the first part of the video interrupt the flow and, at some point, begin to make my eyes hurt, along with those white gradients in the top left corner (would have preferred them to be dimmer) that you used on too many scenes.

At first I thought the video would be about the female figures in Kiritsugu's life and that felt like an awesome idea. Then I saw all those Servants fighting and I didn't understand why they were present at all. I can see why Saber's there (being Kiritsugu's Servant) and if she's fighting Lancer, ok, that's fine. But Archer and Berserker don't fit at all, in my oppinion. I would have liked to see Irisviel (and Illyasviel, as well, for that matter) a bit more before he strangles her, there was no connection created between them before it got to that point (like you did with Shirley).

The song has such a beautiful structure and, although I kind of understand why you'd want to cut it here and there (shortage of scenes, I presume), the cut you made at around 2:58 is too much for me, it hits me like a hammer in the head. Two other things I want to mention are the sync that is rarely on point and the rain added to a star-filled, completely clear night sky.

By now you probably hate me, but don't get me wrong. There are many moments filled with emotion and good atmosphere, I can see that. There are also parts where you did a great job with the scene selection. It's just that the things I mentioned before hinder my overall enjoyment of the video and I can't be as hyped as everybody here, although I tried my hardest and rewatched it like 10 times just for this purpose.

Nevertheless, I encourage you to keep working hard and become better and better with each project you do. I never give this kind of feedback because I know it's not my place to do it, but I felt a strong connection to this video (because I love Kiritsugu so much) and really wanted to speak my mind about it.

I agree with some stuff. Thanks for taking the time to review, i appreciate it!

Amazing work. Doesnt matter if you're novice or pro its really looks great for me . 5/5

I want to like this because I can see that you put a lot of effort and thought into it. And you have all my respect for starting things so far in advance of the contest, I don't have that kind of discipline.

However, there are too many things that don't work for me. The numerous fades to black in the first part of the video interrupt the flow and, at some point, begin to make my eyes hurt, along with those white gradients in the top left corner (would have preferred them to be dimmer) that you used on too many scenes.

At first I thought the video would be about the female figures in Kiritsugu's life and that felt like an awesome idea. Then I saw all those Servants fighting and I didn't understand why they were present at all. I can see why Saber's there (being Kiritsugu's Servant) and if she's fighting Lancer, ok, that's fine. But Archer and Berserker don't fit at all, in my oppinion. I would have liked to see Irisviel (and Illyasviel, as well, for that matter) a bit more before he strangles her, there was no connection created between them before it got to that point (like you did with Shirley).

The song has such a beautiful structure and, although I kind of understand why you'd want to cut it here and there (shortage of scenes, I presume), the cut you made at around 2:58 is too much for me, it hits me like a hammer in the head. Two other things I want to mention are the sync that is rarely on point and the rain added to a star-filled, completely clear night sky.

By now you probably hate me, but don't get me wrong. There are many moments filled with emotion and good atmosphere, I can see that. There are also parts where you did a great job with the scene selection. It's just that the things I mentioned before hinder my overall enjoyment of the video and I can't be as hyped as everybody here, although I tried my hardest and rewatched it like 10 times just for this purpose.

Nevertheless, I encourage you to keep working hard and become better and better with each project you do. I never give this kind of feedback because I know it's not my place to do it, but I felt a strong connection to this video (because I love Kiritsugu so much) and really wanted to speak my mind about it.

5

beast mode Ivan in the clutch

5 gj man !1

5 just for you, my raw queen

Great stuff!

i tottally loved this gg wp

Ожидал от новайса Иррадина большего, халтура

5, но песня ватная.

Dat song! At first I was sceptic, but it turns to be an impressive m\v. Liked the work with camera.

понравился клип (кстати, вопреки тому, что трек сам по себе не особо впечатлил). исходник не смотрела, не могу оценить, как собрана стори.. но в целом всё понятно. единственное, думаю, без магии и иных персонажей, которые прямо не были связаны с гг по сюжету, было бы лучше.

nice. keep it up!