Tempting: First Action

Слабо по сихре и динамике, а без этого фан - не фан.

TritioAFB написал(а):
Don't hesitate when you need help with the betasteing man, I could be a help when you're preparing a video

Sure, once I'm done with the project I'm planning in about a month or 2 I 'll probably ask you for betatesting. I was going to ask you anyway, but oh well you already offered

Don't hesitate when you need help with the betasteing man, I could be a help when you're preparing a video

TritioAFB написал(а):
Since I'm suddenly starting to feel in the mood, you get a free Op from me

Starting:

I got the concept. Even though the scene selection makes it kinda difficult to understand it, I still can see it. Now there are some points I have to mention:

-The differences between the sources. I still don't get it, you could have done an approximation between them by changing them and looking for other sources that look similar and the final video would have probably looked better.
-Typography. Don't you worry, this is a problem between all makers I know. You have to work in it. The one you chose, I didn't like how it blended with the video. This also goes for future posters.
-Disstribution of effects and transitions: It's not just the fact of 'I add this effect for the sake of the effects' it should be logic and understandable why the effect/transition is there and not just to add them without reason
-The fact someone used this song (or a remix I dunno) doesn't mean this video has to be compared with other videos. Unless the other creator really CREATED the song him/herself, then it's ok the comparison. But if not, it's useless to start with the premise:

'But this guy used the same song here (video)'

Because the AMVs are so different, nor we're not even the owners of the material used
-I would have liked to take you for the Level Up. You seem to have the potential to make something awesome but you have to work in several aspects, in order to make that possible.

Don't you worry man, everyone has to start from a point

Thanks man

Also for the transitions and the source differences it would have been better if it were just me because I would have added a lot more stuff to them.

Since I'm suddenly starting to feel in the mood, you get a free Op from me

Starting:

I got the concept. Even though the scene selection makes it kinda difficult to understand it, I still can see it. Now there are some points I have to mention:

-The differences between the sources. I still don't get it, you could have done an approximation between them by changing them and looking for other sources that look similar and the final video would have probably looked better.
-Typography. Don't you worry, this is a problem between all makers I know. You have to work in it. The one you chose, I didn't like how it blended with the video. This also goes for future posters.
-Disstribution of effects and transitions: It's not just the fact of 'I add this effect for the sake of the effects' it should be logic and understandable why the effect/transition is there and not just to add them without reason
-The fact someone used this song (or a remix I dunno) doesn't mean this video has to be compared with other videos. Unless the other creator really CREATED the song him/herself, then it's ok the comparison. But if not, it's useless to start with the premise:

'But this guy used the same song here (video)'

Because the AMVs are so different, nor we're not even the owners of the material used
-I would have liked to take you for the Level Up. You seem to have the potential to make something awesome but you have to work in several aspects, in order to make that possible.

Don't you worry man, everyone has to start from a point

So why the low ratings? Just like what Lear said, it's actually better than most. Also it's really not bad if you understand the concept.

OxyGen1,
Ну, этот клип (Tempting: First Action ) лучше по большинству параметров, за исключением техники, возможно. Особенно если учитывать то, кто делал тот клип - совершенно не удивительно.

OxyGen1 написал(а):
Я просто оставлю это здесь - Yeah!

yes it is the same song, but different version

Слабо. Особенно огорчила динамика.

Я просто оставлю это здесь - Yeah!

клип ниче так, единственное песня приелась уже!
когда радио слушаю, столько подходящих песен для клипов, а тут одну и ту же песню до дыр заезжают! 5 и против