Absolute

ohh, nice
thx

Отличный клип. Монтаж классный. Сюжет не до конца понятен. Начало лишнее. Не подходит для многократного пересмотра под любое настроение. 4

Голосую за 2-ое место в общем зачете, 4-ое место в визуальные эффекты, 3-ое место в оригинальный концепт, 3-ое место в монтаж, 2-ое место в профил, 2-ое место в драма, 4-ое место в психодел, 4-ое место в стори, 4-ое место в использование нескольких исходников.
50/50 - эффорт.
25/50 - как мне понравился клип. (В итоге 75/100)
Стори не нравиться + она не ясная, но за такую серьезную попытку клип заслуживает многое. Достойно.

слегка затянуто, и действительно уже похоже не на амв, а на какой-то мини-фильм. сюжет с наскоку тоже не осилить. но видно, сколько в работу вложено труда, выглядит всё вполне достойно.
5-

Классно, 5 минут прошли незаметно.

Автор удержал до конца просмотра (не силой, конечно), интересный и самодостаточный клип получился, пока один из тех, что понравился больше всего на конкурсе.

Было интересно. Надо новый жанр на ньюсе сделать - мини фильм/ короткометражка)

Sensei surprises us again)

Not bad, you can see you've made an effort. I think your concept is good, especially in some places there were good ideas. but maybe a bit too lengthy.

Много сил вложено и видно сделано качественно, как и другие работы автора. Вот только сюжет не осознал до конца . Поищу помощь в комментариях)

В целом от первого просмотра впечатление положительное

На 5:04 - 5:05 нужно было добавить капли крови падающие на пол (гравитация) и кровь на оружии. + ноги стоят уверенно ровно, а должны подкосится после выстрела. А то кажется что оружие просто уронили. Но это мелочи.

Крутая работа и сюжетно и технически - данную историю посмотрела с большим интересом и визуально клип восхитительно выглядит.

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WaruKamii написал(а):
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU CAN'T JUST MAKE ME INTERPRET SOMETHING MYSELF!!! YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE ROOM FOR MY OWN THOUGHTS!!! YOU CAN'T JUST ARTISTICALLY EXPRESS YOURSELF WITH AN INCONCLUSIVE ENDING NOOOOO!!!!!!

also based

It's wholesome, I honestly liked it, watched without thinking about pausing, or moving the mouse to check how much time left. I really like this one.
The only thing I didn't like, was the feeling of some filler scenes, which is totally understandable in a project this long and story based.

Kroner -AMV- написал(а):
Have you tried this one too?

nope
this one is better (exept size of the video)

I said it in YT :'') you one of the greatest amv editors in our time
Ppl like you who respect the craft
If there any shitty comments here well
Toxic useless critism exist everywhere :''')
Anyway good luck man ❤

Artofeel написал(а):

and sound quality is horrible, mp3 compression is clearly audible, especially from 4min
I tried all versions, plz use lossless source next time

Have you tried this one too?: https://mega.nz/file/poVDHaza#idpuJSOXivnj8YC-wjxxez5BKcJUnFDAFf0TCdHmwDE

Когда я начинал смотреть этот клип, мысль сразу проскочила: ух ты атмосферно и сюжет вроде есть, предвкушаю вкусняшку. Но потом я разочаровался. Такое ощущение, что автор пытался заполнить кадрами всю длину 5-минутного трека. Как результат уже в середине клипа я вкрай запутался в сюжете, а от мельтешения кадров устали глаза. Надо было сделать покороче и использовать только те кадры, которые доносят сюжет, а не просто забивать пробелы пафосными красивыми кадрами со скоростью 5 сцен в секунду.

interesting work, but where is music-video part?
looks like film with soundtrack or a prolonged trailer... which is not my cup of tea, hard to comment, it's not triggered any emotions in me
anyway, not bat story telling and good video overall
GL

and sound quality is horrible, mp3 compression is clearly audible, especially from 4min
I tried all versions, plz use lossless source next time

I hope this is the winner, I think I am becoming a great fan of yours, but it is that you return me to the great times of the amvs, thanks for doing this type of work, they are really inspiring, few editors know how to unite a good concept and with so much depth, the synchro in this case goes into the background, it should not be as decisive as the story, the science fiction scenes are not too much for me, they are part of the context and the protagonist's inner vision. Perhaps the final part happened too quickly, a little more slowness and more descriptive scenes would have helped to improve it. The audio quality is perhaps something to review in different parts, when making a mix of songs it becomes complex to achieve everything in high quality, but it is a point to improve for the next one. I think I'll repeat it again, you should have won the best editor of the year in the VCAs. Even so, your ability to handle different genres and work well on the developments of your videos amazes me.

so good, one of my favorites in the contest for me

The audio quality situation is actually quite interesting: Both here and in the file itself at 4 mins the highs are distorted really badly, but not as much in the rest of the vid. Still noticable at 2:30 though for example. On youtube it's not that prominent for some reason. Might be cause of youtube compression killing high frequencies?
The Video itself was nice to watch although i was kinda laughing when she got red eyes xD In my opinion it's not too long btw, like this it already kinda felt rushed for me sometimes. All in all def one of my favorites so far :3

Kroner -AMV- написал(а):

dude can I suggest you and to anyone else to download the version I put on author site or on yt? cause I don't know what happened here on the player version, going to ask turbo, because also footage quality is less than average

I did indeed download it and it still sounded very muddy.

RadicalDreamer написал(а):

I know that people who are still typing like that cant use their brainerino, but what i was talking about is a little different.
I was talking about that there is too much space given for imagination and abstract scenes, which is not a good thing if you are actually making a storytelling stuff.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU CAN'T JUST MAKE ME INTERPRET SOMETHING MYSELF!!! YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE ROOM FOR MY OWN THOUGHTS!!! YOU CAN'T JUST ARTISTICALLY EXPRESS YOURSELF WITH AN INCONCLUSIVE ENDING NOOOOO!!!!!!

L'inizio è davvero figo con le voci, secondo me ci stavano bene anche in altre parti del video.
Tutto sommato non è male non vedo grossi errori.
Buona fortuna per il contest. (y)

Kroner -AMV-,
it actually got better, keque, was thinking since it's the version the player uses it wouldnt improve. Still, towards the end it's still pretty bad, like at 4:28 it really hits the fan. Did you follow the guidelines, like the AVC/AAC thingi? I had to ask to reupload one of my vids before but that was video quality related

I'd upload le delux version as well, with chunky bitrates just to be safe

JoeBlack2027 написал(а):
Editing wise solid work, there's a tangible story here and I got some lil goosebumps trailer moments out of it too. BUTT. BIG FUCKING BUTT. DAT AUDIO DUDE. IT IS SOOOO BAD. It's 4chan webm level, especially towards the end, wheere the track ramps up, the sound quality is simply abysmal, it takes away from the watching experience cuz I get constantly distracted by it. Please give the encoding part of the process some love next time, it occurs to me as dazzling that you would spend time making this cool vid and not bother with making it look AND SOUND the best it can. Cheers

dude can I suggest you and to anyone else to download the version I put on author site or on yt? cause I don't know what happened here on the player version, going to ask turbo, because also footage quality is less than average

Editing wise solid work, there's a tangible story here and I got some lil goosebumps trailer moments out of it too. BUTT. BIG FUCKING BUTT. DAT AUDIO DUDE. IT IS SOOOO BAD. It's 4chan webm level, especially towards the end, wheere the track ramps up, the sound quality is simply abysmal, it takes away from the watching experience cuz I get constantly distracted by it. Please give the encoding part of the process some love next time, it occurs to me as dazzling that you would spend time making this cool vid and not bother with making it look AND SOUND the best it can. Cheers

WaruKamii написал(а):

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU CAN'T JUST MAKE ME USE MY BRAINERINO WHILE WATCHING A VIDEO!!! NOT MY HECKIN THINKERINO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I know that people who are still typing like that cant use their brainerino, but what i was talking about is a little different.
I was talking about that there is too much space given for imagination and abstract scenes, which is not a good thing if you are actually making a storytelling stuff.

Ща бы мекинг офы с масками в 2020 клипать

yeah koroner nice video bruv, but ain't the sound a bit low quality innit?

RadicalDreamer написал(а):
In this amv i have to make an effort or even think of it myself

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU CAN'T JUST MAKE ME USE MY BRAINERINO WHILE WATCHING A VIDEO!!! NOT MY HECKIN THINKERINO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!