Salvation

исходник конечно изрядно приелся, но для реализации трека он хорошо подходит.

okhostok написал(а):
You deliberately avoided hospital scenes. ) The video is well made, but at the same time, it was boring for me. Because just I know what will be in the next scenes. I think video makers should sometimes use some scenes that help the audience to concentrate. (You tried to use this at 1:48, but that was not enough big change).

Well, I provide one example, if I was not clear. Let's imagine that you are going to start a presentation with speech. Your task is to have an audience in the state of flow ( https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flow_(psychology) ). One way to make a flow, you should use a change. Changes are two types: micro-changes and macro-changes. You used micro-change: silence before the critical scene at 1:48. Macro-change could be something like a small part that reverses everything before. And you have a bit longer duration, so you should have used more frequent breaks. I think that's all.

BTW, I admire your videos. Keep doing this...

Hi okhostok,

Yeah, I agree. On the top of it, using a popular and overused source like Shigatsu might not help in this case. Besides the tempo change on 1:48, I also tried to use flashback scenes in some part to interrupt the order of story narration. The time-reverse-scene before climax(critical scene) that you mentioned seem nice, definitely will give it a go next time.

Anyways, thank you for your time and I appreciate your comment. Cheers.

You deliberately avoided hospital scenes. ) The video is well made, but at the same time, it was boring for me. Because just I know what will be in the next scenes. I think video makers should sometimes use some scenes that help the audience to concentrate. (You tried to use this at 1:48, but that was not enough big change).

Well, I provide one example, if I was not clear. Let's imagine that you are going to start a presentation with speech. Your task is to have an audience in the state of flow ( https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flow_(psychology) ). One way to make a flow, you should use a change. Changes are two types: micro-changes and macro-changes. You used micro-change: silence before the critical scene at 1:48. Macro-change could be something like a small part that reverses everything before. And you have a bit longer duration, so you should have used more frequent breaks. I think that's all.

BTW, I admire your videos. Keep doing this...

Мне понравилось, трек хорошо подобран и подбор кадров удачный.

Даже интересно было смотреть не смотря на баянистый сорц

canalla написал(а):
Только эффект на 01:02 выбивается из общей атмосферы.

Thank you for your advice. I will put more consideration in transition effect in future.

Мне понравилось. Только эффект на 01:02 выбивается из общей атмосферы.