"And lead us not into temptation, but deliver us from evil...." well, with temptation and the evil I mean the female being that God gave us men ... and you maybe know what Eve did ... bringing Adam to ruin ... and even today men often let women turn their heads.
Backstory of my concept(song and Anime): about few month ago I started with a complete different project but I got a blockade, so I dropped it ... and then for a long time I heard "this song" again! and although I can not speak French, I still knew what the song wanted to tell you. The sound and the vocals are so smooth and so oddly soothing and like the whole body has a sort of sexual excitement. And why this anime? For me it was immediately clear that only Monogatari fits well, ...especially Senjougahara fits perfect as the main character, cuz her stoical kind and her clothing fits so good for this song... just which one exactly? well, I didn´t want Kizu and a mix of the seasons(too hyped) ... so BACK TO THE ROOTS! It was for me only Bakemonogatari in question ^^ And I already had a basic concept for a long time.
why the title "succubus"?
A succubus is a female, especially beautiful and lustful demon, who seeks a man to be sexually with him .... and here are 4 of them for Araragi, who will win? ^^
Have fun ; )
Информация
Аниме: Bakemonogatari
Музыка: Vendredi sur mer - Ecoute cherie
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@ybStar: thx much, hope you enjoyed it.(Mayoiiii)
@Эль-тян: Спасибо
@RadicalDreamer: thx for your (full) Feedback. somehow I had to grin because you were unsure if you should mention that questionable fx ... but hey, it was good that you spoke it out. Points where you're really right, at least on one thing. So, because of the movements, well, I think it's good that way ... was meant that way, even if it might be a bit strange. But because of the Corner blurs, there you are fully right ... I should have omitted some places ... because of spoiling the picture, unfortunately I like this effect too much. because of the static Lypsync, if you mean the part from 1:12 - 1:31, well ... I didn´t want to have any movements in there ... because as a person she is quite stoic and adapt it statically. but I can understand that it bothers you and probably others. Thanks for all the details ... and that you like the style from this work.
@DrPenguin: thanks for the appreciation.
@`ZeRO: yep...it sounds like "truselya" but what that means? and yeah right, lyric subs would probably not be bad. and thx for cheering.
@Dm1try[A]: Even if you arn´t so convinced, I still thank you for your opinion
@VideoBeats: uhm...uhm..well.. yep, it was a joke :D Thx for your point of view. I even made sure that it does not look so bright... Danke für´s Daumendrücken!
The Video itself is good. Liked the atmosphere :3 The cc was too bright sometimes but i think others already stated that. The Concept in generell worked, having the girls from bakemonogatari seducing arararararagi isn't the newest idea ever, but it works and you definitly made some twists that made it stand out. Good Luck
Один из тех случаев, когда работу надо пересмотреть, и не один раз, чтобы сформировать какое-то окончательное мнение.
Ну, наверное, работа на 5 ( судя по восторженным отзывам ниже ), однако я выставлю 4.
По клипу 0,35 - 1,02 вкусный кусок, понравилось что фан не рандомный с элементами сюжета, сюда бы сабов интересно о чем поют. У автора получаются все интересней работы с каждым разом удачи на коне.
Good job.
GL
Overall style is cool, probably what i liked about this video most.
Some scene selection is dope, nice flow and sync.
There was some qustionable fx. I'm not sure if i should talk about it, because it hardly interfere with viewing, but since I decided to give a full feedback, let's start.
That camera moves was strange. I cant say if it's bad nor good. It felt weird.
Corner blur was irrelevant (mostly, this is suppose to be placed in the scenes with close camera looks, fullscreen faces for example), it was only spoiling the picture.
Aaand of course that lipsync was kinda too static sometimes. This is where any camera move would work, because scene itself is still image.
Anyway, I'll give my first 5 on the con for this, that style and visuals deserves it, good luck!
Какое же хорошее настроение создано в данном клипе) Приятно смотреть)
I just mean, this work looks better and more solid, than your akross entry this year) There were some quetionable technical points, which haven't affected the overall impression abput the video
@HonyxOtaku: omg, again such detailed feedback xD (typical for you) but I'm glad that you like it ..., sry for 1:41 but you know.. :D Uhm,tss.. don´t push Araragi to get all girls cuz to many girls make problems.
@Arcothy B3stEck: thx much, and you´re right some minor lacks are there... I think the lyrics are matching partly?!
@kebenaj: thx for liking it anyway
@reice: thx mate, really thx
@Mesogear: thanks, I must agree with you, cuz a few scenes could be refined.
@EVOsvik: I tried my best, thx
@AntaresHeart07: yeah.. you like the boobs sync too, xD, thx much for your words.
@Turbo: thx you, wrote it so clear the google translated it understandable. it´s nice to read your words, cuz just what you mentioned/all the points was my goal! but yep some lacks are there.
@AngrySmile: thanks mate
@Lion0608: I don´t understand it all, but generally it didn´t sound bad.thx
It is perfect ! ohh i dont find one thing what i dont like ^^ i like the song - the anime - the colors - the zooms maybe to bit hard but for me i like it still (the zooms)
I like the scene selection it fits perfect what you used.
Oh yea the picture from ne 02 at the start ha ha at the wall nice.
I like the zooms at the start when we go more to the tv ^^
Ha ha araragi will get all 4 girls.
I really like at 0:36 how you do it with the black frame (border) and the blue white colour.
I like the font what you used at it.
0:57 :O hanekawa looks creepy at this picture xD
3 pictures from boobs xD i would do the same face at 1:38
1:41 yea we know ha ha and pen pen ohh man xD
1:46 nice idea with the street ground.
1:59 - to the end xD i like all ha ha really nice ideas :D with the tvs and stuff
The final credits are really good too :D
Sadly i cant say anything what i dont like
JUST GO FOR ALL THE GIRLS ARARAGI !
Nice work, i wish you the best :) you will win :D
В общем и в целом довольно неплохо, но мне не понравилась цветокоррекция и еще ряд спорных решений, то есть местами хорошо смотрится, а местами такое ощущение, что автор не доработал или схалтурил.
я не слежу за конкурсом плотно, но да, складывается впечатление, что средний уровень работ весьма высок
1:58 I really dont like putting the Frame out of the box, but with this style its perfekt, its enough in the backround, so as a viewer you really appreciatethe the dynamic.
I dont understand french, so i just looked up the lyrics, because i had the urge to know!!!
I will watch it until i find something to ask you to go to the gallows!