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Плюсую комменту ниже. После просмотра остались хорошие эмоции.

Душевно, приятный клип.

Lion0608:

Cross fades are not that bad, people just critisized the length)
3-4 frames is quiet enough.

CFs are very good with the smooth vocals, but they are not to be overused, as they attract to much attention. Cuts themselves (apart of being cross-faded) should be comfortable in size, direction, light and other fings. Othervise they are to be ajusted.

Using a crossfade does not automatically means that the connected scenes will fits each other well.

OK now I clearly understand，The Cross fades I use is too long, so too much to attract everyone's attention, contrary to the fluency of the clip, Using Cross fades for unmatched scenes will make people's attention shift from the story itself to the clip. The clip should not be noticed.
I will pay more attention to this in my later works.
thank you again.

Wuyi:

I will improve it，Proper fades is not bad, right? I think it helps to create some sort of emotion.

Cross fades are not that bad, people just critisized the length)
3-4 frames is quiet enough.

CFs are very good with the smooth vocals, but they are not to be overused, as they attract to much attention. Cuts themselves (apart of being cross-faded) should be comfortable in size, direction, light and other fings. Othervise they are to be ajusted.

Using a crossfade does not automatically means that the connected scenes will fits each other well.

-Kisagi-:

Hello! For me it was very hard to watch to the end. The sources you have chosen were not bad, but the scene selection and pacing made it uninteresting and can’t even gather any emotions with it. The fades felt too much and very predictable; imo you should have chosen some scenes that aren’t static and let them go on a bit the cut to the next scene in a few places. Using cross fades are nice, but using too much can kill your video and your Audience especially when you know when and where it’s going to happen.

Very thanks for your advices.you mean easy to predictable is bad，is it？I am confused about this.
If the story can be predicted, it is just plain，is this mean?

The fades is really too much，I have understood this from the comments of others ，I will improve it，Proper fades is not bad, right? I think it helps to create some sort of emotion.

Драматичненько и воодушевляюще получилось и трек этому отлично способствует. Ну и сама идея, конечно, хороша и для меня оригинальна.
Засветы же на протяжении всего клипа, наоборот, утомили - каким-то сплошным флешбеком вся история получилась.

Wuyi:

The fast part of the song？2:45~2:47？Thank you anyway for your Comments.

yes, it starts from there. thank yóu for the nice vid: it has a unique flavor (but the number of fades should be reduced)

Hello! For me it was very hard to watch to the end. The sources you have chosen were not bad, but the scene selection and pacing made it uninteresting and can’t even gather any emotions with it. The fades felt too much and very predictable; imo you should have chosen some scenes that aren’t static and let them go on a bit the cut to the next scene in a few places. Using cross fades are nice, but using too much can kill your video and your Audience especially when you know when and where it’s going to happen.

kebenaj:

на быстрой части песни очарование рушится, но всё равно это очень интересная склейка с особым ощущением. и трек, который мне не по душе, похоже, работает на общую идею. лайк.

ps. фейды

The fast part of the song？2:45~2:47？Thank you anyway for your Comments.

на быстрой части песни очарование рушится, но всё равно это очень интересная склейка с особым ощущением. и трек, который мне не по душе, похоже, работает на общую идею. лайк.

ps. фейды

Kroner -AMV-:

CC means Color Correction.

I've not watched the show, so I don't know if you changed the story or not, but it's the first time I saw this anime used in that way, and it was at least something interesting. Those fades ruined a lot the whole vid honestly, and song didn't fit properly the most "intense" moments of the vid. Song cut was really noticeable and you didn't manage the strong part of the song. Everything is really slow and static and this made it a bit boring, but I really appreciate the idea behind so I think that with some work on your editing skills you can improve a lot, Gl for the contest

From the story level, the story seems to be different from the original, but I think the mood conveyed is the same.Are these Cross Dissolve really so different from songs?I just think that Cross Dissolve can convey more emotions. Thank you very much for your advice.

Lion0608:

I think CC here stands for Color Correction

Thank you！Now I know what is cc.

Wuyi:

what is CC

I think CC here stands for Color Correction

CC means Color Correction.

I've not watched the show, so I don't know if you changed the story or not, but it's the first time I saw this anime used in that way, and it was at least something interesting. Those fades ruined a lot the whole vid honestly, and song didn't fit properly the most "intense" moments of the vid. Song cut was really noticeable and you didn't manage the strong part of the song. Everything is really slow and static and this made it a bit boring, but I really appreciate the idea behind so I think that with some work on your editing skills you can improve a lot, Gl for the contest

Эль-тян:

00:58 - умора

Dm1try[A:

"]Нормально, но я заскучал.

No exciting point to hold on your watching desire.is it？ I am very sorry.But I really can't create a non - Daily atmosphere，It is a ordinary story，I pay more attention to shape the Special mood —— regret， But See your comments, I know, I failed.
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HikanAMV:

(Tell the truth, I'm so nervous.)
lmfao

-well since u r the serious type I'm gonna be serious with u.
song is bad af, cc meant to be used to improve the quality ur cc made the quality worse
over all I watched only 15s with skipping which means the amv is very boring and not enjoyable at all. any way good luck in the con, may the god be with u and make u ditch ur nerve

I can't understand what is CC？Other problems You can look at my reply to other people，thanks your Comments.

00:58 - умора

Нормально, но я заскучал.

Душевно так. Захотелось посмотреть исходник, несмотря на то, что до этого было смотрено не мало других клипов по сорцу и такого желания не возникало.

(Tell the truth, I'm so nervous.)
lmfao

-well since u r the serious type I'm gonna be serious with u.
song is bad af, cc meant to be used to improve the quality ur cc made the quality worse
over all I watched only 15s with skipping which means the amv is very boring and not enjoyable at all. any way good luck in the con, may the god be with u and make u ditch ur nerve

Ridiculous CHAN

Wuyi CHAN

А мне говорили у меня много кросфейдов :)))
Атмосферно, конечно, но технически кривовато. Слишком много кросфейдов (которые еще и затянуты) так еще и кадры порой очень плохо состыкованы. Зато тепло и уютно.

Кстати в конце, где он реабилитацию проходил, как по мне, не хватает образа матери, которая его ждет в конце, ну или просто подбадривает (хотя может идея была другой и он там был бы неуместен)

Good mood, but too many crossfades.

По-моему, у автора очнеь хорошая идея была, и удалось передать свои чувства на все сто. Мне сложно подобрать слова по-русски и уж тем более на английском, чтобы не обидеть автора и дать понять, что в плане подбора мв и нужных кадров он проделал неплохую работу. Получился очень у местный двойной профиль: мама-глазами ребенка и ребенок глазами мамы. И как эта любовь помогает ему в жизни. Вот бы ему в будущем не потерять этого умения. Удачи.

Технически работа показалась сыроватой. Слишком длинные кроссфейды. Чуть плавности монтажу. Странноватый эффект сжигания пленки, который не совсем, как мне кажется,подходил по смыслу.