Move Along

Работа с синхрой хорошая, сюжета нет что плохо, просо для нарезки не цепляет, 4 за старания

Theredflash66:

Actually action-fighting can be cheerful depending on what the editor wants it to look like and on the mood of the song like in the video Chronicles Of The OCD Goth Cowboy Jesus Future Overlord where it shows both expressions and kept it a fun action.

There are different types of action type videos and not just serious, so that pretty much explains everything.

your example is much more action than fighting,
it is less fighting than "Move Along"

action can be fun/cheerful when the fighting is not in the foreground and when the fighting is not serious (I can't call such videos "action-fighting")

JBHUTT09:

I think it fits with the song very well. The song isn't exactly cheerful. It's about fighting through hardships and the suffering that always accompanies the process. The line from the chorus "And even when your hope is gone, move along" is incredibly appropriate for the Toaru series. It's about fighting against the odds. Sometimes winning, sometimes losing, but never giving up.

It's not that the song is cheerful. It's exciting and full of energy. Just like the Toaru series. And that's why I used it.

your arguments works for those who are familiar with Toaru series

Criterion of truth:

Track you used the "All American Rejects - Move Along" is cheerful - IT sounds like That and the Lyrics are cheerful too (chorus for example)
on the Other Hand AMV contains some Fighting with "scary faces" (0:07, 0: 31-0:33, ...) and Blood (0:25, 0:44, one nineteen, one twenty-one, ...)
THUS We have "emotional dissynchronization" - AMV is cheerful to Hear and "scary" to watch

I think it fits with the song very well. The song isn't exactly cheerful. It's about fighting through hardships and the suffering that always accompanies the process. The line from the chorus "And even when your hope is gone, move along" is incredibly appropriate for the Toaru series. It's about fighting against the odds. Sometimes winning, sometimes losing, but never giving up.

It's not that the song is cheerful. It's exciting and full of energy. Just like the Toaru series. And that's why I used it.

Criterion of truth:

action-fighting shouldn't be so cheerful

Actually action-fighting can be cheerful depending on what the editor wants it to look like and on the mood of the song like in the video Chronicles Of The OCD Goth Cowboy Jesus Future Overlord where it shows both expressions and kept it a fun action.

There are different types of action type videos and not just serious, so that pretty much explains everything.

JBHUTT09:

I feel the need to address this

the track you used "All American Rejects - Move along" is cheerful - it sounds like that and the lyrics are cheerful too (chorus for example)

on the other hand AMV contains some fighting with "scary faces" (0:07, 0:31-0:33, ...) and blood (0:25, 0:44, 1:19, 1:21, ...)

thus we have "emotional dissynchronization" - AMV is cheerful to hear and "scary" to watch

JBHUTT09:

the Toaru Series is all about the combination of comedy and action. That's what the author had in mind when he wrote the novels. I tried to honor this.

even if so, I didn't read it,
and there is no clues in the AMV to find out that the source anime is comedy too (till the very end - 3:25)

Criterion of truth:

action-fighting game should be Garnier, not cheerful,

I feel the need to address this. The Toaru Series is all about the combination of comedy and action. That's what the author had in mind when he wrote the novels. I tried to honor this.

в принципе вполне приятная работа, хотя и не без ошибок (ну а куда ж без них то? ,) хлопорты местами совсем не раздражали (т. к. их не так уж и много, так что они минус не заслужили, по крайней мере от меня), длительность клипа тоже. понравилась эмоциональность

Автор молодец.
Клип смотреть было приятно и длительность 4 мин тоже не напрягла. Чувствуется любовь к исходнику и к героям, так как в эмоциональном плане клип очень хорош. Неплохая синхра и м/в. От меня 5

экшн-файтинг должен быть гарным, а не жизнерадостным,
поэтому главная задача клипмейкера - подбор задумки и видео/аудио - завалена

это значит вот что - постарался он там, эмоции выразить, подыскать отрывки получше, засинхрить, но все впустую - на оценку клипа уже с самого начала был наложен серьезный минус
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action-fighting shouldn't be so cheerful
primary aim of the clip maker - to choose the idea and video/music - isn't successfully achieved

it means that all the effort - to express the emotions, to choose the exact video fragments, to synchronize video and music - is wasted 'cause the final rating of the clip is damaged initially

poorly served with vocals

3 от меня, для первой роботы супер, но не для главной!

Хлопорты местами, ритм не выдержан, плохая подбора кадров...
4, против

Думал дропну на первой минуте, но всё-таки решил посмотреть.. и не пожалел об этом, очень классно эмоции показаны, да и подбор не то чтобы сцен, а подбор действий здесь хорошо связуется с треком, понравилось, субъективная 5

4 минуты без идейного бреда с плохой синхрой и не удачными кадрами. мельк мельк и мелькает. и затянуто. и о чем оно вообще? и зачем?
3 и оставайся в оценочной :(

Для оценочной отлично :) и за

В принципе всё не так уж и плохо, лично меня клип все-таки зацепил и понравился, нежели наоборот. Не помешало бы пофиксить местами, так как пропущенные основные биты - это не ок и иногда кадры идут ну совершенно не те. Поставлю 4 за старания и за Индекс.
З.Ы.Блендинг надо отключать.

Мне нравится! На 4 вполне и даже на главную можно поставить

ушол в коллекцию 5 и за

Very nice! I like the series myself. Also, you could have put the music name instead of just putting the band.

Anyway, I liked 4 GL in future edits!

4 с двумя минусами для оценочной

Сцены ну не те, ну вообще не те.

Не могу точно оценить т. к. под впечатлением Unbreakable , но 4 поставлю.